• "As one of popular used geophysical tools, the…"

→ "As one of the most commonly used geophysical tools, the …"

EXPLANATION: "one of …" requires "the" ("one of the …"); before a verb ("used"), an adverb must be used.

"one of …" 后面需要加"the" ；在动词之前，如"used"，一定要用副词。

• “…imaging section by the parameter of the secondary differential.”

→ “…imaging section using the parameter of the secondary differential.secondary differential.”

EXPLANATION: use “using” to show what was used to do something. Also avoid using “by using” (the extra word is unnecessary)

使用“using” 以表明某物用来做某事。还要避免使用“by using” ，额外的词是多余的

• “…has more ability to find the most available resolution…”

→ “… can be used to obtain the optimal resolutionresolution…”

EXPLANATION: use proper, scientific verbs and word choice

使用正确的、科学的动词，词语选择要适合于科学表达

科学写作：摘要撰写及常见错误（一）

科学写作：摘要撰写及常见错误（二）

科学写作：摘要撰写及常见错误（三）

科学写作：摘要撰写及常见错误（四）

科学写作：摘要撰写及常见错误（五）

科学写作：摘要撰写及常见错误（六）

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