英诗译 -今见一只蝶(五言) 鲍海飞 译 2010-2-8 Today I saw a butterfly Author Unknown 柏舟老师独具匠心，发现我翻译的诗《今天看见一只蝶》，如果用五言句式结构会更紧凑，读起来会更具韵味，我试着将这首诗歌再翻译成五言句，题目亦改为《今见一只蝶》。谢谢柏老师指正！ Today I saw a butterfly, as it floated in the air; Its wings were spread in splendor, Unaware that I was there. 今见一只蝶， 空中翩翩舞； 羽翼展秀美， 未晓我旁立。 It was such a thing of beauty, It was a sight to see; It was the perfect masterpiece, Full of grace and majesty. 物美竟如此， 一瞥即可见； 完美世杰作， 优雅与壮丽。 I found myself thinking, to what can this compare? And then, of course, I thought of you, And I wished that you were there. 忽然我沉思， 有谁堪与比？ 忽然想到你， 多想你旁立。 God sure was extra careful, When He formed and fashioned you; You too, became a masterpiece, Yet God is still not through. 上苍亦小心， 造就你无异； 你亦一杰作， 上苍何尽美。 He's daily making changes, that other folks can't see; You're already true perfection, At least you are to me. 大道育生机， 凡夫莫见谛； 你已很完美， 至少对我是。
英诗译 -今天看见一只蝶(七言) 鲍海飞 译 2010-2-8 Today I saw a butterfly Author Unknown 那是林间花草间翩翩起舞的蝴蝶，那神奇的造物主，世间除了你还有谁能够相比？ Today I saw a butterfly, as it floated in the air; Its wings were spread in splendor, Unaware that I was there. 今天看见蝶一只， 翩翩起舞摇身肢； 羽翼盈展独秀美， 未曾知晓我旁立。 It was such a thing of beauty, It was a sight to see; It was the perfect masterpiece, Full of grace and majesty. 天下之物美如此， 一瞥即见还有谁； 世间完美之杰作， 充满优雅和壮丽。 I found myself thinking, to what can this compare? And then, of course, I thought of you, And I wished that you were there. 忽然发现我沉思， 有谁如此堪与比？ 自然我就想到你， 多想你就在那里。 God sure was extra careful, When He formed and fashioned you; You too, became a masterpiece, Yet God is still not through. 上苍何曾不留意， 造物成你无差异； 你何不是一杰作， 上苍亦不尽善美。 He's daily making changes, that other folks can't see; You're already true perfection, At least you are to me. 大道每天育生机， 此非凡夫所见谛； 其实你已很完美， 至少对我是如此。
英诗译－世间最美 鲍海飞译 2009-11-27 我一直在寻找着那个答案，偶尔一天，当那清风翻过了一叶又一叶的秋色，站在秋风中，一片秋叶飞过我的身旁，我拾起那片秋叶，却赫然发现，那秋叶上刻着一首异国的小诗，我读起那首小诗，忽然发现，这就是那我一直在寻找的答案吗？ 世间最美物为何？ 六月玫凝五月露， 芬芳南风无雨色， 真诚待朋勿做恶， 喜悦莫要匆忙过； 美丽何曾矫揉作， 纯朴自然真情露； 灯光莫使眼眨苦， 回忆没有心痛处， 蝶恋花来花恋蝶。 世间最美物为何？ 吾思终非汝所得。 附 Elizabeth Barrett Browning (1806-1861) THE BEST THING IN THE WORLD What's the best thing in the world? June-rose, by May-dew impearled; Sweet south-wind, that means no rain; Truth, not cruel to a friend; Pleasure, not in haste to end; Beauty, not self-decked and curled Till its pride is over-plain; Light, that never makes you wink; Memory, that gives no pain; Love, when, so, you're loved again. What's the best thing in the world? Something out of it, I think.
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